Wow, this was really good. As I read on, I found myself falling for Robbie Carmichael, much like the narrator has. Some bits made me laugh, especially when you wrote Robbie was the kind of charmer that your father disapproved of and your mother touched herself at night to. The way you've written this is brilliant, and I loved the back story to the photo. This was well-written, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!
February 17th, 2013 at 11:31am