Sex, drugs, and Rock N' Roll often isn't the best thing in life.. - Comments

cliff hanger "eeerrrrr" write more

interesting beginning..... most make gerard too be sweet and stuff, but having hurt the lead character at the begininng of the story made it different keep going!!! and you don't need more idea your own are rele good and original! keep it up

Verrrryyyy interrreeesstttinnng heheh weird writing! Keep it up! I have an idea for the following chapters....but then It would be partly my story...It has to be yours

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hey, my computer at home is broken...
ill be getting a new one, hopefully really soon...
at the moment im at an "express" library computer...
that gives me 15 minutes to do whatever...

so im very sorry if i dont post much.. but it means that when i do post, ill post 4 or 5 chapters at once!

cool story

xx

awesome story =)

i...love...THIS!

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

oooh i like it more soon please

That's so sick! In a good way though, lol, you're an awesome writer and you posted so much when you just got on Mibba
GO YOU!
It's wayy cool!

Venom And Rebellion:

'kay... I like this story. ^.^ It's awesome.

'kay... I like this story. ^.^ It's awesome.

I have a ton of it written out in my notebook...
The next chapter is it for today, but I'll try and post more maybe toight? after I write more .

O.O uh oh.... Write more! Pleaseee.

Write more! ^.^

... =O This is my 100th post. ^.^

Interesting! I like it. Bad Gerard. >.<

Lol ...write more soon please?