I love this so far and I love the flirting between the two of them and sometimes i wonder with stories like these like they talk on the radio and im sure if i heard a voice i heard from talking to someone on my show i would be like that sounds familiar maybe sometimes it doesnt click but i do like this.
The meat-ball scene was epic and it's funny to see that they are in the same situation; Brody with her mother and Brian with his friends... I wonder how her mother is going to react when they end up together if they do of course. She might faint . Anyway, I'm waiting foward for Brian's next call to the radio station and see if he mention the meat-balls because he must have recognized her by her voice since she works in a radio station.
Oh, and I totally can't believe she didn't recognize him!! Lol. Maybe she will put it together after the fact? And I wonder if he knows who she Is? I wouldn't doubt it. Lol Update please!
Oh fuck....! This chapter Was pure gold! Like EPIC!!!! I dont even know where to start!! Her mom..lol, I loved thier banter and her moms dramatics. Your dialogue in this chapter was A-mazing!!!!!!!so good!! And then Brian.. Jesus, i almost died of laughter. I was literally cringing at the end, he was being such a creeper, but totally awesome at the same time. When he leaned In and asked if she liked balls in her mouth I almost choked on my tongue. The best part about it all though was that it was all so believable because you just know in real life he's probably got some serious game!! And i could totally see him being so damn cocky.:D I'm in love. You NEED to update this! Oh and for the record, Bri's date "exit" as I will call it, was the best ever! Totally pulling a scene and dissing the girl hard only to turn around and tell her to hit him up if she wants to get it on was so fucking awesome. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!
Generally I don't read. I write. But this? Well this is worth the read! I LOVE it. The idea is I unique and well written. Bravo! (: I can't wait to read more.
loved the update! i want to think that maybe Brian and Brody are going to meet up....and that he's gonna know who she is but she's none the wiser...great chapter babe! can't wait for more