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  • fowzia n.

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    this story is amazing! more, i need more!
    August 1st, 2013 at 05:48pm
  • Abmora01

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    Plz continue
    February 24th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • CalamitiesandDreams

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    Love the bird/painting references and analogies. Strokes of genius. Cannot wait for more! Mr. Green
    February 16th, 2013 at 10:40am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    I love this. Are you going to update this soon? I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
    February 2nd, 2013 at 09:51pm
  • State Of Grace

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    I am in love with this story. There is something really different about the way you write and how this story is compared to other fan fictions. My favourite part of this chapter was when you were describing her hatred for being afraid, it was really different way to look at things. Absolutely adored this, update soon!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 11:02pm
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    @ We'll Be A Dream ;;
    @ CalamitiesandDreams
    @ nobodyimportant19

    Thank you, guys! I was nervous about it being too mysterious so early on, but I'm glad you like it! The feedback is very much appreciated. I'm working on chapter two x
    January 19th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • We'll Be A Dream ;;

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    this seems brilliant! cant wait for more! xx
    January 18th, 2013 at 11:14pm
  • CalamitiesandDreams

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    Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant start! Mr. Green The cryptic suspense has got me excited for more. I hope you continue writing this story.
    January 18th, 2013 at 09:51pm
  • nobodyimportant19

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    It looks great! I love really original stories. Can't wait for more. :)
    January 18th, 2013 at 08:56pm