Lacemoth - Comments

beautiful

I just love the words you use and how you weave up the story! :) Great work.

I loved reading this story. Your descriptive skills are completely out of this world, which is a great thing! Because of the detailed way you describe things, I can easily put myself in Lora's position, see the room that she's in with her grandmother and feel what she's feeling. I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it - it's just perfect! I don't know if there's going to be extra chapters or not, but if there are going to be, then I'm interested to see where this is going since it's not that clear yet. Keep up the amazing writing, and well done!