Maybe Brian can just poison Zack or something and then him and Matt can ride off into the sunset and have glorious sex forever!!! Can't wait for more!!! They can't be apart too long :(
BRB SOBBING! Noooooo!! I really do feel like crying!! </3 Zachary needs to die a slow and painful death for this!! I think Matt should do unspeakably horrible things to him and then get his Bri back Gah!! I'm so sad now :( You did make me laugh with Derpy Brian so I'll forgive you. But just this once! Please don't make me cry again! Haha. More soon :D
@ FollowingTheWolves I can't talk on behalf of ZV but i think we'd pretty much say the same thing to you. Thanks for the feedback. It's really appreciated. Feedback always helps any writer get better and helps them n the future with the little things in a story... So from Purple89's end, thanks again!
Just to let you know that I will be only reading one of everyone's stories to start with, then I will go back and read more of them. Tat way its fair for everyone and I'm not reading the work of one author for an entire week. As for the story.
I was a little skeptical at first, usually the teacher/student stories don't catch my eye that often. One thing that didn't really bode well for me was that everyone was so accepting, Jimmy just fell into the gay lifestyle in a paragraph and Brian was okay with everything going on. Not even a little bit of complaint on the bad treatment he got from his masters.
On another note; Luckily I kept reading on, I adore this story more than you will ever know. I like how the plot is and all the crazy stuff going on. I got so sucked in to this story that I got sad and literally said 'aww come on!' when I realized there were no more chapters. I honestly believe that you are a great writer and I will defiantly be checking out more of your work. I'm subscribing and recommending.
I think Zacky belongs in a loony bin just because of how obsessed he is with those two or getting back at him or whatever he's doing. Which by the way, why is he so obsessed anyway? I mean does he want Matt to himself or does he want Brian back or what? I'm still a bit confused. Anyways please update soon
Fucking Zacky what the hell like seriously what the fuck is ur problem like seriously, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Ps. Yes I looked at his crotch....more than once, I couldn't help myself it was just there beggin me to stare I try to resist but it was too powerful I had to stare....I feel ashamed :( lol
I swear I did NOT look at his crotch.. how did those pants not rip though?? uhm I mean...
OH fuck! Zacky now got evidence!!!! That is so not good!! A picture speaks louder than any words.. frickin hell!! the beating really just made him more angry and a bigger bastard...
I finally caught back up on this story, I hadn't read it in a while, but since it updated I figured I would catch up. The story is going really well. Oh, and for the record I didn't notice the word "not" so it doesn't count. Alright, yeah it does because I would have looked anyway. The comment got the best of my curiosity.
Zack needs to get a fucking life and get over his little fucking petty jealousy shit. And yes I looked at his crotch i couldn't help it, I tried reading your words saying not to but I did and i tried to make my brain listen (okay I didn't even try to make my brain listen it had his own mind at that point)