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  • viralstorm

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    I think it is hilarious that she didn't go to the Brits partly because Taylor was there. If this is what you call writers block, then please let me drink some of the alcohol that you are buzzing off of. It must be some good shit.

    I don't like how weird Harry was being when he first arrived and I don't really buy his explanation, but he made up for it by being so cute with Blair. The image of her snuggled up next to Lux and fast asleep is insanely adorable, and I love that Harry snapped the moment for everyone on Twitter to see.

    #ReasonsWeLoveSlonroe They have amazing chemistry and we get to read all about their hot kinky Styles sex. Bahaha.
    February 28th, 2013 at 04:58am
  • musiclovex3

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    This is awful i promise! Its really cute
    February 28th, 2013 at 03:50am
  • Abmora01

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    It is not awful it is amazing plz keep writing:)
    February 28th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • amaya.-.

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    Life happens, writersblock happens. Stop being so hard on yourself love, we all very much enjoy your updates :)
    I think it was a lovely chapter, especially the conversation between Blair and Harry at the end. You've made their bond almost tangible.. and in those 'alone time moments' it's at it's most obvious. I like reading those, makes me feel good inside. I hope there really is something like that.

    You're an amazing writer, don't doubt dat for a second.
    -Xx
    February 27th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • jellyisamazing

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    Update soon!
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • Abmora01

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    Plz tell me it's not the end keep going keep going sequel if you have too plz this is beautiful :,)
    February 26th, 2013 at 04:48am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    This is too good. :) I mean, B and Harry are meant with each other. I love your writing style, btw. :) It's easy to read and it flows really well. And I low how this is about One Direction. Since I love them, it's making me love this story even more.

    But I would love this story even if it's not about 1D, but I'm glad it is. :)

    Update again?? <3
    February 24th, 2013 at 04:11pm
  • flowerchild7

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    I thought this was a great chapter, well I actually always think your chapters are awesome :p but I liked this one because we got to see more of Blair's dad and I liked that and the interaction between all four characters involved :) as for Niall and Jenny... I just think it fits in too well, maybe a little too cliche. Like Blair has already had a lot of shit happen to her bad, but she also has a lotof stuff handed to her and I think to not have to say good-bye to jenny just makes it seem like she always gets what she wants, idk if that made sense, and I think that Niall and jenny just fits too well, you know like (unfortunately) life doesn't harmonize that well with what we always want... sorry for the novel haha :p but I'm a writer so i love feedback and you asked so...yeah :p Can't wait for an update! and what kind of bump in the road are we taking about.... [between H&B]haha :p
    February 24th, 2013 at 03:31am
  • Stressingstyles

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    Is it just me or did you quote The Vow in this ? It was a great update by the way!
    February 24th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • littlemisslonely

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    Shit like this is what makes me have unrealistic expectations about love and relationships.
    February 24th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • Cliche-Trite

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    @ XoHugsXoxOKissesxO
    Aw I love you to! Um, not really. I might do a one shot at some point for them but as much as I love Niall I don't love him like that so I find it really hard to write like that about him if that makes sense? Aw thank you! :)

    @ musiclovex3
    I seriously love you for commenting!

    @ amaya.-.
    I love writing their private moments. Their dialogue is the easiest thing to write in the whole story for me. I'm glad you still like it, i keep worrying people are getting bored of the story.

    @ flowerchild7
    How come you don't like them together? Just curious, i love hearing what people think and why. I haven't decided what I'm doing with them really. The plot change will affect Harry and Blair really but it's not a huge twist just a bump in the road. Their moments are cute to write. Their moments tend to come from me sitting and listening to music or just before i go to sleep and then i write it down and fit them in when i can. I have like lists of cute things that they might say or moments written down, i had loads left over from the other story that will never be read but in my head they happened if that makes sense? Thank you for commenting!
    February 24th, 2013 at 02:21am
  • OliveRein

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    Okay, so , i love you, and i just wanted to ask....have you thought about doing a side story off of this about niall and jenny? i think it would be so cute. just a though :) keep up the good work- you're amazing!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 10:05pm
  • musiclovex3

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    I seriously love this story
    February 23rd, 2013 at 03:49pm
  • amaya.-.

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    Not shit, I like it. They're getting to know eachother again. I like reading their private moments, the dialogue between them.

    -Xx
    February 23rd, 2013 at 10:58am
  • flowerchild7

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    I kind of don't like Niall&Jenny together, but I'm always subject to change my mind. I'm curious to see where this conversation with her dad is going to go AND my favorite in this is all the awesome wonderful H&B moments. Its just too cute for words, but I'll attempt elaboration. I like the moments where Harry is so predictable and Blair calls it, its cute and their dynamic/ chemistry is so there and spot on. I'm interested in this plot change... would it affect H&B or other secondary characters? I loooove long stories so 50-60 chapters sounds lovely but my opinion may change depending what's in them :P Can't wait for wonderful updates :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 02:46am
  • amaya.-.

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    Fillers are nice from time to time, It's fun reading cute things about them together :)

    Great job

    -Xx
    February 22nd, 2013 at 10:48am
  • U Burst My Bubble

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    Love the story cant wait for more
    February 22nd, 2013 at 05:31am
  • jellyisamazing

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    :DD I love the way you write. It just leaves me completely wrapped by this story.
    February 22nd, 2013 at 04:33am
  • flowerchild7

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    Sooo Adorable! I love it!
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:51pm
  • RebeccaT

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    I lOved the new music video!! It's perfect
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:40pm