Lux - Comments

this is truly adorable, and I can't help hoping that it's a true story.
Joke, I know, I know, It's not real. But still, a girl can dream!

I love love love this story.

I'm excited for the next chapter. Harry seems to be fond of Lou and Tom already, which is good. Harry being his sweet self as his bird is being all lovely as well. This was very loved! Can't wait for more. :)

Awe. :) So perf. Like seriously.
Update soon? :)

"at least you aren't breaking up with me."
OH HARRY. YOU WOULD. HAHAHHAHA.

This was beautiful, indeed.

PERFECT

I totally love the idea of this story and can't wait for more!!!!!!!

so this is kind of amazing

Wow! I can definitely say that this surprised me, but in a good way. Ever since that rather disturbing story involving Lux and Zayn was written, every time I see one of these stories, I always think bad things and your story was no exception when I saw the title. But then I read the prologue and smiled because it wasn't dirty and the plot is SO creative!

With the slew of One Direction stories on here, it's rare that you come across one that has an original plot. And (as previously mentioned) there have also been some rather disturbing things written about the boys, so you never know what you're gonna get!

Anyways, it was a nice little prologue. It gives insight, provides a little information, but doesn't give away so much that I wouldn't need to read any other chapters to find out what was going to happen.

The only thing I would have liked was some elaboration on the first two bits. I don't know if that's something you plan to address in future chapters, but I I would've like maybe an entire chapter on Harry finding out and then informing his manager.

But this was good! Well written, enticing and full of good suspense. I wish you luck with it even though I know that people are already going to fall in love with it. ;)

Can't wait for more. Love this already
Update?(:

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^^ was all coming out of my mind.

seized ships:

Holy shit.

Not what I expected and this is perfection and I love it, I effin' love it... This is new.. and gorgeous and amazing and Lux is too cute

Holy shit.