February 10th, 2013 at 05:05am
Lux - Comments
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I'm excited for the next chapter. Harry seems to be fond of Lou and Tom already, which is good. Harry being his sweet self as his bird is being all lovely as well. This was very loved! Can't wait for more. :)February 4th, 2013 at 02:41am
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Awe. :) So perf. Like seriously.
Update soon? :)January 26th, 2013 at 02:53pm -
"at least you aren't breaking up with me."
OH HARRY. YOU WOULD. HAHAHHAHA.
This was beautiful, indeed.January 26th, 2013 at 05:18am -
PERFECTJanuary 26th, 2013 at 04:03am
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I totally love the idea of this story and can't wait for more!!!!!!!January 26th, 2013 at 03:30am
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so this is kind of amazingJanuary 26th, 2013 at 03:09am
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Wow! I can definitely say that this surprised me, but in a good way. Ever since that rather disturbing story involving Lux and Zayn was written, every time I see one of these stories, I always think bad things and your story was no exception when I saw the title. But then I read the prologue and smiled because it wasn't dirty and the plot is SO creative!
With the slew of One Direction stories on here, it's rare that you come across one that has an original plot. And (as previously mentioned) there have also been some rather disturbing things written about the boys, so you never know what you're gonna get!
Anyways, it was a nice little prologue. It gives insight, provides a little information, but doesn't give away so much that I wouldn't need to read any other chapters to find out what was going to happen.
The only thing I would have liked was some elaboration on the first two bits. I don't know if that's something you plan to address in future chapters, but I I would've like maybe an entire chapter on Harry finding out and then informing his manager.
But this was good! Well written, enticing and full of good suspense. I wish you luck with it even though I know that people are already going to fall in love with it. ;)January 25th, 2013 at 09:27pm -
Can't wait for more. Love this already
Update?(:January 25th, 2013 at 04:30am -
dereytvauhubirvjds.
^^ was all coming out of my mind.January 25th, 2013 at 03:57am -
Not what I expected and this is perfection and I love it, I effin' love it... This is new.. and gorgeous and amazing and Lux is too cute- seized ships:
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January 25th, 2013 at 12:36am -
Holy shit.January 23rd, 2013 at 12:02am
Joke, I know, I know, It's not real. But still, a girl can dream!
I love love love this story.