I really wish I was more familiar with the characters and storyline so that I had a better grasp of what was going on, because your description is really amazing and I can't fault the way you tell the story. The only thing I could find bad about this was that I couldn't work out fully what the big plot surrounding all the characters was, but that's a stupid thing to say because it's fanfiction.
So again, I'm not clued in on the plot and characters but I do know that your writing style is skilled, and still really easy to read. With any normal fanfiction that I didn't know about I wouldn't be able to read it easily and I wouldn't try so hard to figure out the plot.
So again, I'm not clued in on the plot and characters but I do know that your writing style is skilled, and still really easy to read. With any normal fanfiction that I didn't know about I wouldn't be able to read it easily and I wouldn't try so hard to figure out the plot.
Thank you and well done :)