I. I like this a lot. I generally have a lot of doubts about Tolkien fanfiction but this is good. I think it's pretty interesting that all these outsiders are coming together. I wonder who their father is? Maybe someone Thorin or Dwalin knew, and they recognize them.
I really like the story and it's different from others I have seen. An Elf/ dwarf children? That's a very interesting mix and also funny since the whole history between the two. I feel bad for Kila feeling like an outsider within a group that is so different that her. :(