Acomist - Comments

This is beautiful. Please, please continue this story. Your writing style is phenomenal.

Why this story only has 14 comments? I think it‘s as brilliant as ever. I envy your writing style, I love the plot and the characters and I love how it progressed while I was busy with deadlines. Tell me as soon as you publish something, tell me, I would buy it.

This story makes you think to get it. I love the extra brain work I guess it's the pleasures of reading. I keep reading hope for chapters like these and I can't wait to read more.

Interesting story. A little hard to comprehend at first due to the lack of detail, but it's weird because it slowly starts to make sense as the story progresses. Not sure what to make of the story, and where you're going with but I kind of like it. So, please please finish because I hate when a story stops in the middle (even though I myself have never finished a story thus making me a hypocrite).

I guess its hard for me to follow, how many people are sick? What's the timeline?

There is a lot of guessing to be done which is nice. But as you can see I'm used to descriptive things-just look at my comment, or my story- so I'm not exactly sure what to say.

I think just clarifying the time would help :)

I like how each chapter is really short. And we have to guess some details. It is a little hard to follow though.

Sometimes the story is inconsistent. Did you actually write it when you were high? That's really not good for you because it messes with your memory and your body. You wouldn't want forget or only be able to write then.

Lol i don't know who morrissey is but how can someone be delightful and conceited at the same time? That sounds unbearable to me!

wow i dont even know what to say, this is amazing and one of the best things ive read on here in a really long time. god every word is perfectly placed like it was made to be there, fuck you have talent

oh my God I missed an update, damn! Both chapters are lovely and your writing style amazes me every time. It's beautiful.

The new layout is soo pretty, I love it. And chapter seven is perfect, every word every sentence is perfect, I would not change anything. Thank you for this lovely update.

From the very beginning it was love. You paint the world in just one sentence or a word. It‘s brilliant, but I hate the layout.

This is amazing. It's almost creepy, but in a good way. I love your style of writing and how the narration is sort of unclear. Please update soon.

interesting

I love the way you write the detail is great and I'm always confused to who is narrating. Update soon I can't wait to see how this story plans out.

So now I'm interested who is Martian? What is the relationship between him and Cathy? How important is Martin to Cathy? I hope all my questions get answered update soon!

This is very weird- but intriguing.

Well I'm not sure exactly what this is but I like how you write so I want to read more