this is still such a wonderful story :)
May 26th, 2008 at 10:25pm
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i'm still on the edge of my seat here....i don't think i could pull of suspense like this even if i tried...so then was steven in on the kidnapping of the kids?!May 11th, 2008 at 02:46am
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I NEED to read chapter 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!April 30th, 2008 at 01:24am
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i'm on the edge of my seat here....the suspense is pretty much killing me! i'm so anxious to know what happens!April 25th, 2008 at 05:37am
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moremoremore.
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
way to leave a person in suspense!April 24th, 2008 at 05:28am -
I agree with the constructive criticism from above ^ ^ ^ ^ ^, but yeah.
The end deff shocked me. Holy hat.
Really good, keep going pleeeeease.April 24th, 2008 at 12:06am -
way to just leave us hanging like that, seriously?!
you do have a few typos as ^^ mentioned, but other than that, i'm hooked. you could try double spacing in between dialogue lines, ex:
"blah blah blah"
"blah blah blah"
"blah blah blah"
that way it's not this massive block of dialogue. can't wait for more, seriously, i need to know what happend!April 23rd, 2008 at 05:24pm -
some typos, but other than that this is a very good story! it sure did leave me in suspense with so many questions. more soon ? :]April 23rd, 2008 at 04:43pm
