Wish On A Star - Comments

This is simply beautiful and I'll try very hard to make the layout darling.

That second chapter was very mysterious. I keep wondering who broke into Cailee's house and who gave her the money. Please start on the next chapter soon!

@ TheBohemothCrow
I sort of explained it a little bit in the first chapter, but don't worry, I'll elaborate on it soon!

I think this is quite captivating and rather well written. I would really like to know not just who stole her star and why, but why she started making wishes on paper stars in the first place, it seems like an odd practice and I would like to know the story behind it. Please put that in soon, if you have not considered it already. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks.

Thank you! The next chapter will be up by tomorrow, or Saturday.

I think this is wonderful story, and like ohne dich, I don't start liking stories from the first chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going!

@ ohne dich
Thank you! I have started on Chapter 2, and it will be up soon!

I don't know where your going with this honestly, but it is well written (in my opinion, but I am no expert), and I can't wait for you to update. I can't help from wondering who took her stars, what kind of wishes will be granted, and how her and this thief will ultimately connect. I usually don't get hooked from things off of the first chapter. But there's a first for everything.