Carry On - Comments

Moriarty; (250)

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Age:: 27
Location:: United Kingdom

Oh my emotions- they're everywhere! One moment it was all sad and horrible and then the next it was all beautiful and sexy! Dang woman, you're playing havoc with my heart here! Sex in a bath, nice choice lady! And then it was all adorable at the end! I've read this about four times now and it gets even better every time! I loved it!

March 9th, 2013 at 01:07pm

heretic. (210)

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Age:: 80
Location:: United Kingdom

Ohh that was so good! You really are a talented lady! The best of luck, but I'm sure you won't need it!

February 12th, 2013 at 12:29am

AJ9 (100)

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Age:: 57
Location:: United Kingdom

Would you consider turning this into a longer story? It's brilliant

January 27th, 2013 at 07:15pm

synful_desires (100)

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Age:: 32
Location:: Brazil

Loved it! I so want a full-length! :(

January 26th, 2013 at 01:22am

wakeup. (100)

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Age:: 31
Location:: United States

This was amazing! The descriptions were so on point and brought the story to life really well. The way you wrote Brian, my God sdfjklds. *-* Sexy and sweet at the same time. Absolutely loved it. Good luck with the contest! [:

January 26th, 2013 at 12:59am

Fuck You Mibba! (135)

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Age:: 92
Location:: United States

loved this... it made me emotional at first because you made her character very realistic... i mean i was feeling her pain... and after that it got hot and heavy and loved it... Sweet Brian is always hot

thank you so much for participating hun

January 25th, 2013 at 11:34pm