Save a Broom; Ride a Quidditch Player - Comments

  • chekov.

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    Niiiiiiiiice. Lick I like the ending, it's so Fred. And this was incredibly hot. Three thumbs up.
    July 8th, 2013 at 11:46am
  • MyLipsAreLying

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    @ ur_best_nightmare
    Thank you!
    And your welcome(:
    January 23rd, 2013 at 02:57am
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    Great job! This was awesome. I really enjoyed it. The only criticism I have is that you switch back and forth from present to past tense in your narrating. But don't freak, it's SO not a huge deal. It wasn't terribly distracting from the HOTNESS that your story possessed. Lol. Thanks for your entry!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 02:29am
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    @ YoungandLoadedKid
    Thank you(:
    January 22nd, 2013 at 07:31am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    This was freaking awesome! First time I've ever read smut from any HP characters. And the fact that Fred is my favorite Weasley!

    This was great! <3
    January 21st, 2013 at 08:58am