Demonta - Comments

@ iloveandybiersack1
Yes that would be depressing, don't worry you'll see what happens xD

@ nightwhispercw
Aw thanks ! I am so glad you like how the story is coming along :)

I like how this story coming along I wonder what oli going to do after knowing Andy knows about the turning

@ Wordsareweapons27
Aww thank you, and yeah it makes it interesting just they can't die or leave each other, that's just depressing

@ iloveandybiersack1
LOL oh wow, haha you're too cute. I like that idea as well. Sorry I like having a bit of "darkness" with my writing sometimes like even out the light and the dark parts.

@ Wordsareweapons27
Uhh, they could have vampire babies! That's a good and happy plot!!

@ iloveandybiersack1
Haha, you're too funny, it's okay. I get distracted and off topic so easily too and Ikr, I hate them too haha but there has to be a plot :( unfortunately haha. I like to have a lot of stuff going on, keeps it interesting.

I'm shivering right now cause I'm eating ice cream(: That was completely off topic but seriously leave Andrews and Nicholls! Ugh I hate them! Oli and Andy are sooo adorable, like seriously<33

@ Wordsareweapons27
your very welcome your a great writer

@ Wordsareweapons27
your very welcome your a great writer

@ nightwhispercw
Aw! That is awesome. I'm very glad to hear that you love it and I appreciate your comments very much! :D

I cant wait the next update :)

@ Wordsareweapons27
ok :) im loving this story i started it yeasturday and now im on chapter 9 a bit behind but im getting there :) <3

@ nightwhispercw
No, it's okay! Don't feel foolish and no need to apologize :) I'm glad and appreciate you bringing it up if it was confusing to you so I could explain it. I don't mind at all :) I know it can get confusing when there's more than one point of view and when the characters have a conversation, it can definitely be a little hard to follow at times so no worries at all!

@ Wordsareweapons27
omg i feel foolish now im so sorry

@ Squid_sheep
thank you so much for your input. You'll see what happens, don't worry ;) and as much as I would like for that to happen, I don't like to rush to conclusions too fast or else there would be no story or elements to lead up to a certain point. I like to twist things and shock people so be prepared :)

@ iloveandybiersack1
I'm so glad you liked it ! Thanks for your comments :D I appreciate it a lot. I feel so happy when people enjoy what I write.

@ nightwhispercw
Thanks so much for your comment ! I appreciate it a lot :D but you need to read the story very closely because when Jayy is talking to Oli, THEY are talking ABOUT Andy. I understand it might get confusing because there is a lot of discussion going on between Jayy and Oli in this chapter and also the switching points of view can be a little confusing as well. Near the end, that's Andy's Point of View I am portraying when Oli comes into the room to "Save Andy" from Andrews (antagonist). I'm so glad you love it though!

not trying to be mean I love this story I just finish part 3 qnd you have two mistakes you said andy when jayy was talking to oli. and then close to the end oli calls andy oli just saying not trying to be ruid really