March 17th, 2013 at 09:02pm
So this story interests me. I have absolutely NO idea what the kid is saying and I even went to the lengths of looking it up on Google translator and apparently they don't know either. -_-
Haha but all in all I really like where this is going and i'm excited to see what happens next and learn more about the...'heroine'? Well she's saving the kid so I guess that's what she is. Now i'm rambling and it's unattractive. Can't wait for more! :)
I honestly really enjoyed reading this story. The plot was far different from anything I've ever read, which is a good thing. Spelling and grammar was perfect, as far as I could tell. I liked pretty much everything about it, and the only con that I can think of right now is probably that a third of the story was in Japanese. I don't have a problem with Japanese, of course, but it was hard to understand certain parts of the story where it was just Haruto talking to himself. Other than that, great job