It's great to see Jem opening up to the people close to him. I bet it is going to take him quite some time to deal with stuff like that. I hope it doesn't get out to anyone else :S
I'm really enjoying writing this and once the story is complete I'll need to tell you what's my spin on things and what's in the movie. Maybe, if you're good.
I was so happy to see a new update when I came home. School and work have been insane and I love coming here to read your stories. Keep up the awesome work.
I'm glad everyone seems to like it. It's harder writing it because it is a movie and a book, but I think it's important to have some of the original components, even along with my own twists!