OK I have read the first chapter so far and I have to say that I like it, Stella seems kind of like me because that's exactly how I act in the school. I wouldn't be rude but I would have liked at Ella then looked at the table and thought "what do you think?" lol anyway I've subscribed and I will continue to read this story and comment.
By the way I like the layout, I can read on it and it looks nice.