Blue - Comments

He’s run out of lies that mean something.
You honestly killed me here.

The sadness in this piece is overwhelming and I can't help but feel sad myself. That last line brought tears to my eyes. It's a baby we are talking about and family and what they are going through and it's a situation I don't even want to imagine. I'm going to say this one more time, well done, girl. This is perfection!

-Maria.

Found this through the review on the home page, and I'm super glad that I did.

I never thought something so short could affect me the way that this has. You've taken a tiny snapshot of this life that Spencer and Brandon have built and shown it to us, and (I hope I'm not the only one) we're left the imagine the rest. And it's truly miserable for a while. Terrible and sad and I think I'm going to cry.

This...is just beautiful. Amazing. Extremely well done.

Wow, I thought I would be ok reading this but really, the last line killed me. I couldn't hold back the tears, this was just beautiful.
It's amazing how such a short text can possess so many emotions.

Kudos.

He’s run out of lies that mean something.

So I was fine, fine, fine reading this and then you just had to put that at the end. And I was fine, fine, fine reading it all, even if it's about Brendon and Spencer and a dying baby. I was fine because I can handle that. But. But then you put that line and I'm just sitting here, blinking away tears. And I just hope you know I never cry when reading fics.

Brendon refuses to eat, sitting at Jamie’s side late into the night, until he’s leaning heavily on the glass of the incubator, waiting for something to go wrong again.
I died.

I just drowned in my own tears.

Why.

"No he won’t."

WTF. WHO'S HONEST LIKE THAT TRACY? REALLY? WHO? YOU ARE I GUESS. YOU ARE AND NO ONE ELSE BECAUSE IT HURTS TOO MUCH TO BE HONEST LIKE THAT. IT HURTS. IT. HURTS