Another Boy Without a Sharper Knife - Comments

Cutieface231 (100)

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I'm uploadingthe chapter right now:) it's be on in 5 minutes :)

January 26th, 2013 at 06:37pm

Darlin_Ill_Be_Okay (100)

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@ Cutieface231
Sooooo much better:) can't wait for the next update!!

January 26th, 2013 at 08:46am

Cutieface231 (100)

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Thanks ! In the next chapter which is almost done I added the quotation marks

January 25th, 2013 at 04:49am

Darlin_Ill_Be_Okay (100)

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I like the story line a lot, but I agree that some quotations and paragraphs would be nice. It'd make for an easier read:) great so far!!!!

January 25th, 2013 at 04:47am

Cutieface231 (100)

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Thanks

January 25th, 2013 at 04:39am

It'llgetbetter (100)

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I liked the chapter :D

January 25th, 2013 at 04:39am

Cutieface231 (100)

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Thanks!:) glad you like it I just finished a new chapter chapter 4 tell me why you think

January 25th, 2013 at 04:28am

It'llgetbetter (100)

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I think you should continue it :). Quotation marks would make it easier on the reader to know when the characters are speaking. Helpful hint but i like it so far :)

January 25th, 2013 at 04:27am