This just makes my Zarry shipper heart hurt... This was brilliant and can't get enough of it. Zarry forever, bitches!! 
April 6th, 2013 at 12:58am
I was listening to pandora while reading this and then C'mon, C'mon started playing and I lost it. I dont know why but I just cant handle listening to Zayn sing while reading a slash-smut between him and Harry and keep a straight face.
Anyway, about the story, I've never actually read a slash but as far as anal goes, this was really really good. I wasn't having trouble imagining this at all, which is excellent. Couldn't get enough. I was actually sad when it ended but it was so good.
Great Job!