@ sincerely hailey I know, I'm going to write an update soon (hopefully by the end of the week). Thank you so much for hanging in there despite my complete inconsistency with updates!
@ sincerely hailey Aw thanks :) I unfortunately don't know much about MMF outside of their music, so I don't know if I'd be able to write Matty without butchering his character :/
Haha I can picture him as a nurse too. It's fitting lol. Great update as always. I really can't wait untill this starts picking up more. I have a feeling you're goin to run wild with this and we'll all be reading on the edge of our seats! <3
@ waswritteninbl00d Don't apologise, take it as a good thing that I missed my stop haha and you're very much welcome! I just felt the need to tell you everything I thought about this story and I'm positive you won't disappoint with this story.
@ vickyptv I'm sorry you missed your bus! D: Thank you so so much for the comment, it means a lot. I'm hoping to update regularly from now on, I hope I don't disappoint!
First thing's first; your writing. It's perfect. You put so much detail into it. I was on a bus when I read this on my way home from work and everything seemed to disappear and I felt like I was there, in this story. I can honestly say I love the style of writing you have.
Secondly; even though this is still early days for this story, I can honestly say I can really see this taking off even more. It's interesting, well written and detailed and it keeps you on the edge of your seat and reading (I ended up 3 miles from home because I missed my stop on the bus) because I just didn't want to break away from it. When I said edge of your seat, I was literally on the edge of my seat.
Thirdly; I will be following this story all the way through to the end. I'm looking forward to reading this and watching this unfold. Like I said, it's really well written. I'm really excited to read the next update and keep up the fantastic work! :)
**Edit: I also think the rating should be put up, due to the fact of violence and gore, just to be on the safe side.**
@ sincerely hailey I'm so sorry about my lack of updates! I started college, and I didn't think anyone was interested in this anymore! I'll try to write an update within the next few days. Thanks for not giving up on this!