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  • Norman Reedus;

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    I could just feel the pain as you described the nursery ready and waiting for something that would never come. I am in tears as I think of the agony she is feeling and its almost like I can feel it myself. Like ugh I'm hurting for her :(
    "Her hand going to her now empty stomach"- Crushed, how devastating
    I can understand her need to stay in the nursery, almost as if it would will the nightmare away but God I feel so bad for Matt at the same time. He has to grieve and support her and deal with the guilt she is putting on him.
    " It was as if it would bring the baby back. " - I comment as I read, I swear I am psychic..I completely picked up on her thinking before it was even said. Just proves how good of a writer you are.
    “I'm hurting too.” - Poor Mattie :( But it is good he was able to open up to her and make her see.
    I loved that he was strong for her even as he was breaking down himself. And just picturing them laying in bed together, cuddled and comforting each other. Thank God they had each other to get through something as horrific as losing a baby. Great job, Steph! Yet again you amaze me.
    May 28th, 2013 at 10:50pm
  • HanerJoy

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    Damn my throat is starting to hurt, I almost cried :( I loved it :D
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:57am
  • BelovedSyn

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    Oh god. I was in fucking tears and honestly I fucking loved it! Its so well written....a few mistakes but so good!
    January 26th, 2013 at 03:48am