I Can Change Him - Comments

@ Bluebirdofhappiness
okay so I'd be happy to edit your work for you, if you private message me and then give me the chapter before you post it I'll correct the spelling and fix your grammar for you so you can post it

@ Death The Angel
So helpfull. Yeah the layout sucks majorly, I picked a random one and it realllly sucks. I'm not new to Mibba, I'm new to all of the changes, I used to know how to work spell check on my IPod and make layouts, but now I'm clueless.

Again, I'm sorry about my horrid grammar and spelling. Its quite imbarising sometimes. But like I said I was never taught this stuff, I went to a school where they could give less of a crap about the students. But like I've been told by my teachers that I have good potential in writeing of I know more about spelling and grammar. I love to write so. :)

@ Bearrshack
I don't need to read anything again. She gave her reason and apologized to you because she obviously knew her mistake. Telling her that her grammar and spelling is bad is kinda (really) pointing out the obvious.

Look all I'm saying is I'm sure if you were in her shoes you'd feel really bad if someone like you came in and said a comment like yours on your story. So how about easing up a little and giving her some slack, like I said she admitted she had errors to fix.

@ Bluebirdofhappiness
The first thing I'd suggest is properly capitalizing the title of your story. It'll take you two seconds :) So instead of "I can change him" You'd put "I Can Change Him"

The next thing is the background, it does need a bit of work. You could either request a layout (I can give you a link if you like) or you can get an already made layout (again I can link you) but if you really want this layout I suggest finding a temporary layout then getting all the glitches out of this one just so people can read it easily :)

@ Death The Angel
I was criticizing her spelling and grammar, and if you see it otherwise you should read it again.

I agree with Death The Angel. This story has great potential, and if you ever want help with spelling/grammar, etc, message me or something!

@ Bearrshack
You're assuming everyone has spell check but some don't, all I'm saying is that people post stories on mibba to get concrit to help improve themselves. Your comment pointed out her mistake but you neither tried to help her or tell her nicely which I think was a bit harsh.

@ Bluebirdofhappiness
Would you like me too private message you or to just tell you over this story comment?

@ Death The Angel
That would be very help full and nice of you :) Thank you.

@ Bearrshack
Spell check is broken on my iPod. Or not available. I'm very sorry about my grammar, and other things. I was never taught any of that stuff at the horrid middle school, and elematary school I went to. Now that I'm in highschool I'm trying my best to lurn this stuff.

@ Death The Angel
I'm not being rude, I'm being honest. I really wanted to like the story, but I couldn't get past the spelling and grammar. Spell check is available on every computer.

@ Bearrshack
You didn't need to be so harsh and you could have given her constructive criticism to help her.

@ Bluebirdofhappiness
I really like the potential that this story has, if you want I would however love to help you improve by giving you tips and hints on how to get more readers. Don't worry though I don't bite :)

@ Bearrshack
I knew this was going to be a hate comment. This story just poped into my head and I quickly wrote it down, not looking at my spelling and grammar because I didn't have the time to. Sorry, I'm and idiot.

I like the idea of the story. Interested to see how it's going to pan out.

I couldn't even get past the first few paragraphs because of the spelling and grammar.