Ah yes, what a wonderful update. May I also add that your writing is phenomenal! I'm a bit obsessed with it. It's good to hear that you'll be frequently updating. I look forward to it all.
Ohmy. okay, you scared the crap out of me with the start of part three, I was already in love with the story and then I thought you were going to end it! /queue sigh of relief/ anyway, this story is so gorgeous and sad and beautiful and just wow your writing style is so amazing and spot on and I can't wait to read more of this story, just wow.
This is going to be a really crappy comment bUT OMFG THE SUSPENSE IN CHAPTER THREE GURL OMFG I ACTUALLY CANNOT WHERE ARE THE WORDS MAN WOW IF YOU EVEN BASH THIS SOTRY I SWEAR TO GOD
/and thus ends the CAPS
Srsly though this is great and I'm a-okay with you updating this one because I think I'm emotionally invested in this story. (That usually takes like five chapters nowadays, so be proud.)
Your first sentence scared me for a little bit. I mistook it as an author's note (even though they're not supposed to be posted as chapters) and thought you were going to stop writing this: "For those of you already emotionally invested in my story, I’m sorry to say that-" I was just like... AH! No! I really like this!!... and then I read the rest of the sentence... :P
This is really good! I can't even describe the feelings I have when I read from John's perspective. It's so sad, and yet it's deeper than that. I can't wait for this to get even a little deeper.
Wow. What a chapter. This was absolutely brilliant. I'm so intrigued. I like that the plot is so different, I'm not expecting whatever comes next, you know? I haven't read a story like this before, so I'm so excited to see what happens!