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  • everdeen

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    New reader! Interesting and sad plot, it made me excited about the story.
    September 19th, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • shay online

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    Ah yes, what a wonderful update. May I also add that your writing is phenomenal! I'm a bit obsessed with it. It's good to hear that you'll be frequently updating. I look forward to it all.
    September 15th, 2013 at 06:59pm
  • NaiveDove

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    I really like this story! It's different than others and I can't wait to read more! (:
    September 15th, 2013 at 05:23pm
  • Hannibal Lecter

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    Ohmy. okay, you scared the crap out of me with the start of part three, I was already in love with the story and then I thought you were going to end it! /queue sigh of relief/ anyway, this story is so gorgeous and sad and beautiful and just wow your writing style is so amazing and spot on and I can't wait to read more of this story, just wow.
    May 9th, 2013 at 05:53am
  • ignite this angel.

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    This is going to be a really crappy comment bUT OMFG THE SUSPENSE IN CHAPTER THREE GURL OMFG I ACTUALLY CANNOT WHERE ARE THE WORDS MAN WOW IF YOU EVEN BASH THIS SOTRY I SWEAR TO GOD

    /and thus ends the CAPS

    Srsly though this is great and I'm a-okay with you updating this one because I think I'm emotionally invested in this story. (That usually takes like five chapters nowadays, so be proud.)

    /and thus ends my crappy comment
    April 20th, 2013 at 06:45am
  • Simply Ace

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    Your first sentence scared me for a little bit. I mistook it as an author's note (even though they're not supposed to be posted as chapters) and thought you were going to stop writing this: "For those of you already emotionally invested in my story, I’m sorry to say that-" I was just like... AH! No! I really like this!!... and then I read the rest of the sentence... :P

    This is really good! I can't even describe the feelings I have when I read from John's perspective. It's so sad, and yet it's deeper than that. I can't wait for this to get even a little deeper.
    March 17th, 2013 at 04:45am
  • andloveisaword

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    Wow. What a chapter. This was absolutely brilliant. I'm so intrigued. I like that the plot is so different, I'm not expecting whatever comes next, you know? I haven't read a story like this before, so I'm so excited to see what happens!
    February 20th, 2013 at 03:02pm
  • shay online

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    I'm really interested in this. Your writing is quite unique if I must say so! Continue please.
    February 20th, 2013 at 07:54am
  • tessie

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    Omg I love this... It's is actually so good and it's only like the second chapter :P
    February 19th, 2013 at 06:22pm
  • Simply Ace

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    I completely and totally forgot to comment on this after I read the first chapter, but I wanted to say that I like it. I like it a whole lot! :D
    February 19th, 2013 at 05:05pm
  • jcov__

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    I have fucking IMPECCABLE timing.
    February 19th, 2013 at 01:49pm
  • andloveisaword

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    This is gorgeous. Seriously, I've fallen in love with it, and you've only written this bit! Please update soon <3
    February 11th, 2013 at 10:03pm
  • tessie

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    This is gorge... Seriously :P
    February 11th, 2013 at 05:44pm
  • jcov__

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    UGH. such a good plot and it's just beautiful <3
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:03pm
  • Dannichappell

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    Ooooo I like the sound of this story! I can't wait to read more :)
    February 11th, 2013 at 11:45am