Hey, I love this story! I checked it out after you commented on mine (dying is your latest fashion). I feel bad that I can't give you any tips, like you did for me, but I'm terrible at picking up on things like that unless there is blatently obvious repedative mistakes, which there definitely isn't in yours :) I've read every thing you've written in it so far and I'm subscribing right after I post this :) xoxo
July 21st, 2014 at 02:49pm