You described Zayn so well - shy, quiet and slightly closed - the reserved kind of person. And Liam, of course, so warm and welcoming. I've never read a Zouis fanfic before but I'll bet you can make me fall in love with their bromance as much as I adore Larry; CAUSE YOU'RE WRITING IS DESPICABLY BRILLIANT
Omg this is going to be adorable. I just tell. Babe, if you even think that you'd ever be able to let me down with a story... You're absolutely mental and I'm going to lock you up in an asylum. With your computer of course. So that you can continue writing. And maybe I'll give you a pet rock named Herbert.
Anyways, this story.. gah, Zouis is adorable, so I really can't wait to see what you have in mind for this :) It's gonna be amazing, though, of that I'm sure. :)
Can't wait to see where this goes!!! <3 -Mariahhhh;)
GAH. AND SO IT BEGINS. I don't think I'm going to do live commenting on this story to swtich things up, if that's okay with you. :)
But seriously....I'm so excited for this. Because it's going to blow me away. And I'm going to get attatched. And when it does end, I'm probably going to cry. Ugh. Hahahaha
Anyhow, this was a great way to set the scene and get into the story, get a little bit of background info, etc.
And not that you don't already do this perfectly, but I thought Zayn was portrayed really well. The shy, reserved, personality and how he actually cares at least somewhat about school.
Oh and the last time you let me down with a story.....let's see......that time when you wrote about......oh, wait. NEVER. :P
The only thing I will suggest, is that you make the chapter titles a darker shade of grey in the layout because they're really light right now, and they're kinda hard to see. But that's up to you, of course. :)
I can't wait for Louis to see his face!!!!!! They're gonna fall madly in love. Jk, they're gonna think "oh dang he's attractive" about each other and then be awkward and shy because they don't know if the other is homosexual or not. I CAN'T WAIT!!! ZOUIS HERE I COME!!!
i freaking LOVE high school romance stories!!!!!!!!!! xD you really have no freaking clue how excited this got me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My friend is very excited about this possibly being slash. And by that I mean I'm reading your updates and she's playing batman and she looked over and yelled "SEND ME A LINK~"