I am not familiar with the band, Pierce the Veil, so I was rather confused while first reading this, but I decided to give them a listen and they weren't bad! I'd really recommend trying to double check your grammar and punctuation. In order for a story to flow smoothly, it's nice to have some paragraphs that provide a lot of detail so the reader can really visualize!
July 14th, 2014 at 10:13pm
