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  • halcyondays

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    @ platypusmoustache142
    Yes it is! It gets better, hopefully. Thanks for commenting!
    March 31st, 2013 at 03:25pm
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    WHAAAAAT
    she doesnt have a real degree? whoa
    thats like real shit
    haha
    update again soon!
    March 30th, 2013 at 07:53pm
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    @ AlexisMary
    Thank you!! :)
    March 14th, 2013 at 05:16am
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    Really loving this story. It's different from the others. Keep going!
    March 13th, 2013 at 09:20pm
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    @ platypusmoustache142
    Haha thanks for commenting :)
    March 9th, 2013 at 06:33am
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    Omg this was amazing. Like omg harry caslkdfjalkj;al can you just not please yeh thx
    March 9th, 2013 at 02:32am
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    @ hhhalcyonnn
    Haha yayy
    you're welcome!!
    March 9th, 2013 at 02:17am
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    @ Adleigh_Lynn212
    Now that I think about it, I think I'm going to change it to Saniya sobbing into Zayn because I feel like it was too far of a jump to let herself open up to Harry too soon! As always, I appreciate your detailed comments!! :)
    March 8th, 2013 at 08:54pm
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    Hands down my favortie update so far!:D
    This was incredible.I love that we got a glimpse into Saniya's emotions that she has for her past and even now when being confronted by someone from her past.I'm so eager to know what happened and now what lies went around about her.It was really great when she made herself clear to the boys that she didn't hate them just isn't good with people.I was so proud of Zayn for telling Saniya straight up to give Harry a chance.Violence is never fun but in certain cases it's needed like Harry punching Noah was needed.Part of me wanted to be suprised that is was Harry to run over and save her but I wasn't.Though I was shocked when she let herself sob openly and on him.Big step for her that I'm hoping will bring them together more.I'm not thinking anything bam over night because that'd be terrible and rushed but bigger picture small step was taken hopefully.
    Excited for more and happy you updated earlier:)
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:53am
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    @ alwaysadreamer
    Thanks for taking your time to comment, I appreciate it!!
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:21am
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    Harry punching someone to defend a girl. It's a sweet thought. I mean, I don't like violence if its pointless but that's sweet.
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:05am
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    @ Adleigh_Lynn212
    Thanks! I really appreciate your comments; you go so in depth!
    March 5th, 2013 at 11:58am
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    I know this was a bit of a filler but those are needed for us as readers to get the characters fleshed out more.You've been doing a great job with that and I even find myself getting lost in your story.
    It was awesome when Saniya told Harry he was a good cook and how she didn't even try and by polite while opening the door so early.Love that she is being herself.The way she flinched when Harry yelled though is making me think there was abuse involved with her past but I could be wrong.
    Excited for more:)
    March 5th, 2013 at 07:08am
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    @ platypusmoustache142
    Just a tad bit, possibly. Maybe you'll find out soon enough :) Thanks for commenting!
    March 5th, 2013 at 05:00am
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    This was an awesome chapter! is harry a bit jealous of her and zayn????
    March 5th, 2013 at 04:48am
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    @ casscass09
    Haha yes! Glad you love it so far :)
    March 1st, 2013 at 08:56pm
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    A ONE DIRECTION FANFICTION WITH SUITS IN IT. Literally perfect. Love this so far!
    March 1st, 2013 at 07:50pm
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    @ Adleigh_Lynn212
    Thanks for commenting! And I'm glad Saniya's personality is becoming familiar with readers.
    February 25th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    Harry needs to be smacked haha.
    I can't wait for the concert.Also I loved when she flipped off Mike.I really enjoyed this chapter because I got to see more of Sanyia and how she isn't that big of a people person.
    More soon please:)
    February 25th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • halcyondays

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    @ platypusmoustache142
    I try to update once every weekend :) & I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
    February 25th, 2013 at 12:28am