@ Adleigh_Lynn212 Now that I think about it, I think I'm going to change it to Saniya sobbing into Zayn because I feel like it was too far of a jump to let herself open up to Harry too soon! As always, I appreciate your detailed comments!! :)
Hands down my favortie update so far!:D This was incredible.I love that we got a glimpse into Saniya's emotions that she has for her past and even now when being confronted by someone from her past.I'm so eager to know what happened and now what lies went around about her.It was really great when she made herself clear to the boys that she didn't hate them just isn't good with people.I was so proud of Zayn for telling Saniya straight up to give Harry a chance.Violence is never fun but in certain cases it's needed like Harry punching Noah was needed.Part of me wanted to be suprised that is was Harry to run over and save her but I wasn't.Though I was shocked when she let herself sob openly and on him.Big step for her that I'm hoping will bring them together more.I'm not thinking anything bam over night because that'd be terrible and rushed but bigger picture small step was taken hopefully. Excited for more and happy you updated earlier:)
I know this was a bit of a filler but those are needed for us as readers to get the characters fleshed out more.You've been doing a great job with that and I even find myself getting lost in your story. It was awesome when Saniya told Harry he was a good cook and how she didn't even try and by polite while opening the door so early.Love that she is being herself.The way she flinched when Harry yelled though is making me think there was abuse involved with her past but I could be wrong. Excited for more:)
Harry needs to be smacked haha. I can't wait for the concert.Also I loved when she flipped off Mike.I really enjoyed this chapter because I got to see more of Sanyia and how she isn't that big of a people person. More soon please:)
Yes it is! It gets better, hopefully. Thanks for commenting!