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  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Again, same stylistic note as the last one. This applies for this one even more, since it's left-aligned. :D

    Ooooo, I think it's very cool that she's running away. This could be quite cool.

    Whoaaa. Her parents are nuts. Hahaha. It's insane that they kept her, like, captive.

    Ahhh, their first encounter was so endearingly awkward. I loved it. Hahaha. This story seems to be at an absolutely wonderful start! I can't wait to read more. :D
    February 11th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • katiexlee

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    Great update! I really like Paisley and her desire to find adventure. I can't wait to read more about Harry and Paisley's interactions on the train.
    January 28th, 2013 at 08:03am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Sounds good.
    I am interested as to where you take this.
    Update soon please?
    January 27th, 2013 at 11:37pm
  • katiexlee

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    This is a good start. I'm interested to see where it goes.
    January 27th, 2013 at 09:54pm
  • luke ham ham.

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    I like it.
    This is really good so far! I can't wait to see where you take it!
    Update soon :D
    January 27th, 2013 at 01:13pm
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