A in chemistry - Comments

It's so weird that I'm drawn to stories were I feel the characters are a bit childish, but I think you're off to be able to make a great story out of this. I'm not sure if you plan on keeping this, but I just wanted to let you know that I think the little you have posted is great.

@ CourtneyTamaraa
Will do. Thankyou for your input :)

@ OkayChris05
Thankyou :D

Please update :3
Its off to a good start, now you just have to continue, haha.

Well I love the idea and the relationship between Millie and Eboni seems strong. I was going to comment on the bunched up sentences but that's already been taking care off. I would love to read more so update soon

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@ Carrot Juice
Thanks for the feedback :D ill take what you say into consideration, thanks again.

It's hard to read with the sentences all bunched up together. Perhaps you should go back and add some spaces in between the paragraphs? (: Otherwise, the idea seems interesting, and the title is very eye-catching. Good job on coming up with both. I hope your story much success.