January 28th, 2013 at 10:16pm
This was really good. Loved Jimmy all wet and sexy and GAH! I won't go on, I'm exciting myself all over again :P The twist at the end was brilliant. Did not expect that at all.
Small pointer though, try not to use names so much. It was hard to enjoy it when every tenth word (just a random guess) was 'Dana'.
<3
thanks...i appreciate the fact that you pointed that out to me....:)