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  • fifthghost

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    I am back and SECOND BODY IS BASSAM I FUCKING KNEW IT I THOUGHT MAYBE IT WOULDN'T BE BUT I KNEW IT OH GOD OKAY GREAT SO JACK'S MOM IS GONNA BE HEARTBROKEN AND NOW HIS DAD CAN NEVER MAKE AMENDS FOR EVERYTHING NOOOOOOOO

    uh-oh he's in the house of course he was going to find them it's happening

    WAIT WHAT THE FUCK IS ISOBEL HIDING OH MY GOD WHAT

    omfg go Jack The Ripper this cat is a legend

    damn Isobel is bad-ass omfg I panicked that she had a really awful secret, maybe s/t to do with the situation, but I'm glad it was just an emergency gun whoops

    YES I REALLY WANT HIS MOM TO COME BACK JACK NEEDS HIS MOM DON'T DRIVE AWAY DAMMIT

    omfg Lisa and Zack this is wonderful, the popular chick and the laid back stoner

    omg I'm onto the epilogue already holy shit okay let's do this

    Okay, Isobel is so bad-ass, she wins, literally. I'm loving all this "loose ends tied up" thing, you're the best. Riassadee engagement, yaaaassss. But aw for Lisa and Zack, dammit. I'm going to have a headcanon that they get back together in their twenties when Lisa's all successful and Zack's banged a few dudes to get it out of his system and stopped being such a stoner okay? okay.

    OH NO I'M REALLY SAD ABOUT JACK AND HIS MOM NOT BEING CLOSE AGAIN. I think with some serious therapy, she could come back around and they'll be okay. Wouldn't shock me if she and Isobel stayed secretly in contact.

    Aw, it's over. That was really good! Pretty cool twist, I enjoyed it. Happy endings (almost) all round. <3
    February 10th, 2015 at 04:16am
  • fifthghost

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    okay all the references to alex's terrible driving is making me start to worry it's not just a personality trait and you're actually foreshadowing a fucking car crash or something, christ.

    OH MY GOD I KNEW THOSE BODIES ON THE NEWS WERE GONNA BE SIGNIFICANT FUCKFUCKFUCK what do alex's parents know what's going on GOD DAMN THIS IS INTENSE.

    That Zack story, damn. And also, Jack and Alex, doing dirty stuff in a library for the first time. Naughty. BUT I HAVE A FEELING IT WAS A BAD IDEA FOR ALEX TO IGNORE HIS PHONE??? IDK AT THIS POINT.

    I had a feeling there was gonna be some kinda murder thing in this, dammit.
    February 9th, 2015 at 04:13am
  • fifthghost

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    Ooh. So Alex has a bit of a reputation then. Interesting. I WANT TO KNOW.

    But, a TV interview? I feel like this will be disastrous for some reason omfg.

    WOAH ALEX TRIED TO OVERDOSE THIS POOR KID HAS A DARKER PAST THAN I THOUGHT. I feel kinda sad that Jack's pissed at him though, like settle down, it was hard on all of you, let's just breathe.

    Yaaay a kiss. And Alex's first? At least he didn't sleep around during his mad drinking phase.

    I'm finding it a little weird that Jack's mom is nowhere to be found.

    A LETTER FROM JACK'S MOM I'M TOO EXCITED OH GOD

    oh my god this is so intense i knew there was something too fucking shifty about jack's dad AND WOAH WHY IS JACK SO MAD AT ALEX HE JUST WANTS TO KEEP YOU SAFE DON'T BE MEAN TO THE POOR BABY
    February 9th, 2015 at 03:31am
  • fifthghost

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    Oh, hi Jack's dad. You're... not cheerful at all. I would hate him but he's kinda acting weird. SUSPICIOUS.

    I'm laughing at Alex's phone call with Cass "You look great!-- No, not you," etc. Maybe I'm just delirious, I'm not sure you even meant this to be all that funny omfg.

    FINALLY WE KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS THANK GOD JACK IS TELLIGN THIS STORY. But wow, Jack's dad, I'm deffo suspicious of this fucker. And where is Jack's mother??? They got a divorce but surely she's like GIVE ME MY SON. I would be.

    OKAY OKAY OKAY JACK'S DAD HAD S/T TO DO WITH THE KIDNAPPING DIDN'T HE I KNEW IT (and is that why his mom left him like did she know/find out and be like HELL NO and leave him) oooooh I feel like things are happening.
    February 9th, 2015 at 01:16am
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    Aw, Jack's parents divorcing. :(

    But omg it's so cute having them all huggy and happy and sgodhjfgjg.

    ‘oh-god-what-sad-little-animal-are-we-going-to-have-to-take-in-now’ look -- I am dying omfg.

    All of Alex's pets, that's so fucking cute.

    omfg they really took their time getting in touch with the police for God's sake are they crazy how did Jack even get free WHY WASN'T THAT THE FIRST THING YOU ASKED ALEX ARE YOU DUMB.

    But okay ooooh I'm getting curious about these kidnappers, who are y'all. The blonde one described is making me think of Dan Flint omfg.
    February 9th, 2015 at 12:25am
  • fifthghost

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    omfg okay so I'm about to start reading this and the prologue is intense.
    February 8th, 2015 at 11:42pm
  • jaseyslullabies

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    It's almost 4am and I just finished this and I love it so much I'm going to subscribe even though it's finished
    August 7th, 2014 at 09:46am
  • alltimelcw

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    SWEET JESUS THAT WAS FUCKING INCREDIBLE
    April 22nd, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • xMareBear14x

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    Oh my god this story! I'm so in love I can't even deal with it :'g
    December 21st, 2013 at 06:17pm
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    oh my god! I know i'm a bit late on reading this and that sucks because this was really amazing and i fucking cried. i'm sorry for swearing.. this is really something else. i loved it! really very original.. all in all, i love it! i wanna make love to it if that's even possible. i love you! i hope you write more.. smkrjcnlehrfbjkasd i really love you!
    July 25th, 2013 at 07:17am
  • M6277

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    I'M SOBBING, THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVES NOW, OH MY GOD, IT'S PERFECT, IT'S REALLY ORIGINAL, YOU DID SUCH A GREAT JOB! THIS IS SO CUTE I AM cRYING
    July 18th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • SimplySoniax3

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    Wow this was lovely. I laughed I cried I screamed but overall I fell in love. I started reading this because insomnia got the best of me, and then I could stop until I finished. I loved it.
    It makes my heart feel really good because its all fluffy and cute with drama and a legitimate plot and your characters develop and I jus seriously fucking love this okay.
    Amazing story, definitely one of my favorites!<3
    July 16th, 2013 at 01:00pm
  • NeonStripedNinja

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    THIS STORY IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES.
    IT'S RIGHT UP THERE WITH FIREWORKS.
    THAT'S HOW MUCH I LOVED IT.
    YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER AND I'M REALLY SAD IT'S OVER ASFHJFAKJSD.

    sorry for spazzing out in this comment but it was SO good.
    May 6th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • erica520

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    Oh no I can't believe this is over! This story is amazing though. Thank you so much for writing it! :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • erica520

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    Oh no I can't believe this is over! This story is amazing though. Thank you so much for writing it! :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • MasqueradingMemories

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    I read the first sentence and I went "Oh no this is the end isn't it?" Unfortunately I was right and this is over. This was an amazing story and i loved it from start to finish. Great job<3
    May 1st, 2013 at 03:29am
  • aashbyinmypants

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    Crying ok?! You happy with yourself?! Urgh this was amazing!
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:23am
  • Taytayylolli

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    AWW ITS OVER NOW I FEEL COMPLETE BUT AT THE SAME TIME EMPTY AWW IVLOVEED IT THOUGH SOOOO GOOD JOBBB
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:20am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Awwe it's over :( I'll miss you ♥
    April 30th, 2013 at 08:22am
  • byee

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    THAT WAS SO CUTE omg I'm sad it was over but this is adorable omg
    April 30th, 2013 at 05:51am