Darling, You'll Be Okay - Comments

  • Cutieface231

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    I'm sorry, I actually just got a laptop and in going to edit the whole thing over to fix it because the grammar sucks . Sorry
    March 3rd, 2013 at 09:18pm
  • Miyasaurr

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    I can't read this because of the grammar, spelling, and loss and unneeded punctuation.
    March 3rd, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • Miyasaurr

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    I can't read this because of the grammar, spelling, and loss and unneeded punctuation.
    March 3rd, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • Cutieface231

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    You'll see:)
    February 28th, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • cmmn-crtsy

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    I really do hope Tony gets Jess in the end c:
    February 28th, 2013 at 09:45pm
  • Cutieface231

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    Ha thanks honestly my favorite chapter I've written
    February 25th, 2013 at 01:51am
  • cmmn-crtsy

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    That last chapter djehsjscskdlakwgwcdjgkgu awhh ;__;
    February 25th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • Cutieface231

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    Haha ik I do atleast 2 times!! Ha sorry ill try harder it's hard typing on my phone backside autocorrects a bitch . Il try harder :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • cmmn-crtsy

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    I really like the story but would it kill you to proof read it?
    February 23rd, 2013 at 05:37pm
  • AlixTheCreature

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    Its good...Just spelling and punctuation errors.
    Other than that, its ok. I like it.
    February 9th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • Cutieface231

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    Thanks
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:03am
  • AlisonTimeLow

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    Good so far!
    January 28th, 2013 at 05:57am