Sweet Desires - Comments

I'm here as a judge for the NC-17 Only contest.

I liked that you chose to write about an anniversary for this story. It really created a whole story and let me be invested in the characters lives instead of just having everything focused on the sex and that's it, since the characters already had an established relationship beforehand. I think that also allowed there to be little bits of sweetness between the sexual parts and made it feel very well rounded to me.

I liked the flow that you had going in the chapter, but then you had a bunch of lyrics in the middle of the story and it threw me off. I'm all for including bits of lyrics in stories if they fit, but having an entire song there really threw off the flow of the chapter for me and I felt like I almost had to get over that bump and get back into things, which was unfortunate because the pacing was great up until then and I was able to get immersed in everything that was happening.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering!

Well my ovaries are gone!!!!
Thanks and hope this makes you happy ;)
Damn this was freaking wonderful!:3

@ Let Live Again;
Why thank you haha. I'm glad you liked it. I hardly remember this story haha it was so long ago lol. I got second place in the Yummy Contest and for the other one, she never announced the winners so... Thanks for the comment, it made me happy

Wow, This is amazing I really love the desriptive nature of this. I don't normally read sexy stuff like this but I must say this is amazing I love it! I think the locket with the picture and the "I love you" is amazing. Can I ask.... Did you win? haha. I'm glad you gave me this to too read. It's a wonderful one shot dear!

Holy shit that was hot! Soooo good!! Whipped cream and Mr Sanders, what more could a girl want? Haha

I absolutely loved it! Very...satisfying. I hope u win

A great one shot! Loved it!!! I bet you'll win! ;)

Damn that was HOT :P I think I made a mistake reading it at college lol I loved it :D

holy ass hat batman! that was AWESOME! love it!!

That was just really HOT!!!! Loved it!

Hehe what I liked most about this was that I really think you put a lot of "YOU" into it. Like...I think those were things you would do to Matt if he really were your husband lol. I like how you're writing keeps getting better with every story you do. It was never bad writing, but now it's phenomenal!! Good luck babe and I hope you win the contest!

This is really good. It's always hard for me to comment on smut one-shots because well I have a dirty mind and I'm never sure if its tmi for that person. But this was very naughty indeed

I just...I'm speechless. That was naughty for one, but I liked how sweet (no pun intended) they were.