July 7th, 2017 at 08:18am
Well my ovaries are gone!!!!
Thanks and hope this makes you happy ;)
Damn this was freaking wonderful!:3
Sweet Desires - Comments
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September 30th, 2013 at 11:39pm
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@ Let Live Again;
Why thank you haha. I'm glad you liked it. I hardly remember this story haha it was so long ago lol. I got second place in the Yummy Contest and for the other one, she never announced the winners so... Thanks for the comment, it made me happy
September 29th, 2013 at 07:07am -
Wow, This is amazing I really love the desriptive nature of this. I don't normally read sexy stuff like this but I must say this is amazing I love it! I think the locket with the picture and the "I love you" is amazing. Can I ask.... Did you win? haha. I'm glad you gave me this to too read. It's a wonderful one shot dear!September 29th, 2013 at 07:03am
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Holy shit that was hot! Soooo good!! Whipped cream and Mr Sanders, what more could a girl want? HahaApril 17th, 2013 at 02:35pm
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I absolutely loved it! Very...satisfying.
I hope u win February 22nd, 2013 at 10:27pm -
A great one shot! Loved it!!! I bet you'll win! ;)February 22nd, 2013 at 06:34pm
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Damn that was HOT :P I think I made a mistake reading it at college lol I loved it :DFebruary 21st, 2013 at 04:57pm
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holy ass hat batman! that was AWESOME! love it!!February 21st, 2013 at 06:56am
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That was just really HOT!!!! Loved it!February 21st, 2013 at 04:30am
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Hehe what I liked most about this was that I really think you put a lot of "YOU" into it. Like...I think those were things you would do to Matt if he really were your husband lol. I like how you're writing keeps getting better with every story you do. It was never bad writing, but now it's phenomenal!! Good luck babe and I hope you win the contest!February 21st, 2013 at 04:01am
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This is really good. It's always hard for me to comment on smut one-shots because well I have a dirty mind and I'm never sure if its tmi for that person. But this was very naughty indeedFebruary 21st, 2013 at 02:38am
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I just...I'm speechless. That was naughty for one, but I liked how sweet (no pun intended) they were.February 20th, 2013 at 10:21pm
I liked that you chose to write about an anniversary for this story. It really created a whole story and let me be invested in the characters lives instead of just having everything focused on the sex and that's it, since the characters already had an established relationship beforehand. I think that also allowed there to be little bits of sweetness between the sexual parts and made it feel very well rounded to me.
I liked the flow that you had going in the chapter, but then you had a bunch of lyrics in the middle of the story and it threw me off. I'm all for including bits of lyrics in stories if they fit, but having an entire song there really threw off the flow of the chapter for me and I felt like I almost had to get over that bump and get back into things, which was unfortunate because the pacing was great up until then and I was able to get immersed in everything that was happening.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering!