Leave Me Breathless - Comments

  • pawnsinplay

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    Oh my God.

    OH MY GOD.

    This was amazing! I was not expecting him to come in angry and upset that Val left him. Such a good little twist. The sexytime though, holy wow. It was sexy, let me tell you. But then he had to go and ruin it by taking Val's phone call and leaving to go back to her. WHAT THE CRAP MATTHEW YOU ARE A JERK.

    I love this though. So much <3
    February 22nd, 2013 at 01:23am
  • heretic.

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    Really good! Matt what a bastard! Totally sexy bastard though!
    February 16th, 2013 at 12:55am
  • purple89

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    loved this... really! wow!! great job!
    February 15th, 2013 at 01:24am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    I loved this! You should turn this into a full story, it'd be epic!
    February 14th, 2013 at 11:38pm
  • shortygirl

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    This is really good.
    February 14th, 2013 at 09:58pm
  • Moriarty;

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    I think that sex scene left me a little breathless too! Wow, I loved the back story, I think that was one of my favourite parts to it. And the twist at the end, how Val called him back and he literally just started acting like he'd just fucked another woman. Matty made me a little mad in this one, but it was very well written and extremely creative. Well done!
    February 14th, 2013 at 03:29pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    OMG.
    January 28th, 2013 at 10:10pm