December 27th, 2013 at 09:54pm
Savoring Him - Comments
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I am like crazyyy a out your storyyy please upsate fast pweetyyyyy pweeezz :(( :xXxDecember 11th, 2013 at 02:01pm
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Lol just read the new update. I can't remember all my day to day stuff but I recalled every major detail of the story while I was reading.December 2nd, 2013 at 08:07am
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Pleaseeee update!!December 1st, 2013 at 03:22am
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Eeeeeeee you updated!!!!! Omg girl i have been DYING waiting! I thought you quit on the story and i was all like "NNNOOOO". But you updated!!!! I just had to go take a quick refresher though but now everything is back!November 30th, 2013 at 06:40pm
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Please, please, please update this. I'm begging you here.October 21st, 2013 at 06:59pm
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Can't wait for the next update!!! I'm dying to know what happens next!!!July 28th, 2013 at 11:04pm
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WOW! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! totally worth the wait..... and I just wanna say that if I could review this story I totally would.... but I can't.... but this is intense! 
July 11th, 2013 at 04:35am -
Amazing story, I can't wait to see how the plot thickens from this point on.July 10th, 2013 at 08:33am
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I love this story, it's so good. Though I can't wait for the secrets to come out! Especially with Roland. He has somethings locked up. I mean does he even love his bride to be, oh I hope not! There's something fishy going on... Anyway's can't wait for the next update! :DJune 28th, 2013 at 11:51pm
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Have I ever told you that I love Valerie? I think she's wicked cool and chill and just an awesome character overallMay 28th, 2013 at 04:47am
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Nyaa.. awesome lovely<3May 14th, 2013 at 12:39am
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upload more please
April 24th, 2013 at 07:04pm -
i love it! update soon!April 20th, 2013 at 09:38am
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Amazing! Upload MOAR please girlie... <3April 9th, 2013 at 05:36am
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Ughhh cliff hanger!!!!March 31st, 2013 at 05:31am
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Hm... Guess I never commented on this one. I found it before the other one you made me slightly famous for :P And for once I think I prefer the story focused on a more boring topic. :DMarch 30th, 2013 at 04:11am
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Happy comment! March 28th, 2013 at 03:16am -
O.M.G. Update pronto and i mean it!March 26th, 2013 at 09:59pm
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I really really love this!
(you keep saying defiantly instead of definitely <3)March 21st, 2013 at 08:59am
Woooooooowww!!! nooooo!!! eeewww!!!
Yes a lot of us have different views on this story. Some loved it, some couldn't take it (scaredy cats). However this was very well done overall. Your description is flawless and the way you phrase your sentances like the very beggining "this was salty", it gives the real feel of a vampire like the protagonist. We could only read the first chapter as a group and all, but I'm sure some of us will read this on our own time. I love the suspense you hold within your story, it gives me goosebumps. We also love the personalities you gave your characters and how they speak to one another. Brilliant!...one of us says. the only thing we could possibly critisize, is the actual formating of this story. The red on the black with the red tinted background made it hard for some of us to read. Other than that, magnificent! One of us is also in love with this story and will make their own mibba account just to read it... good job (this person doesn't read much but you seem to have snagged them).