Another City...Another Man? - Comments

ah! That cliffhanger is seriously bothering me. Great chapter though! Please update soon!

I'm so loving this but I'm really worried about Jean and I really hope that Gabriel doesn't make things worse. I can't wait to see what's going to happen, PMS.

I love those two together!!! They are so amazingly similar it's like they are brother and sister. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

I seriously love this story!!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I still think Jonathan is a huge jerk!!! I'm glad she's got Sharpie on her side and I love her nailing Kaner's ass to the wall in front of the team. PMS

Okay so I just caught my self up on the last two chapters. First off I would like to say that I do like your story. It has a nice little plot line going for it. The thing that I don't like is that you had it so that your character Jean gave Jon a double standard rule for dating. She told him that she's not ready to date him and he was willing to wait but she also says not to wait just be ready when she is. Well then he goes and gets a date and she wants to tell him but she's pissed and sad about him having a date? I'm sorry but that to me is ridiculous. She was the one who set the rules, she should follow them.

Sorry if this comes off as bitchy or mean but what just happened seems ridiculous.

Omg! Was not expecting that between her and Pat!!!

I don't even know what to think about this...... I really hope that she's not going to do something with Patrick right now, it would be like using him to get back at Jonathan. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

ah fuck Tazer. I like Patrick<3

Ooohhhh shits going down now...

WTH is wrong with Jonathan?!! I'm really not liking him right now.... what a jerk. I feel so bad for Jean right now. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

Why would he offer to give her a ride their if he was just going to ditch her?! omg

Omg nooooo! Omgosh to make her happy sor something get Kaner or someone on the team to take her out and get Jon all jealous. LOLOL

No I don't like seeing heartbreak!!!

It's not even funny how excited I was to see that you updated… Cute chapter and I cant wait for more drama :) but I honestly think Jonathan likes her too much to start dating someone else but you never know! Please save me from studying and update soon!

I can't wait to see what her reaction to Jonathan kissing her is going to be. I love this!!! PMS

I love this so far! You are doing an amazing job writing this! Her personality is fabulous and Kaner<3
Please update soon!

I can't wait to see what's going to happen between her and Jon. I love her personality and I don't know how I missed 3 updates, but I got caught up. PMS

Last chapte kinda boring but I still like the story.

love the update!! cant wait for more!!

I can't wait to see what's going to happen. What a horrible sister. I don't care if you think they broke up or not you don't sleep with them. I love this, PMS