wauw, the last chaptor was great.. ohh i would never ever forgive my sister if she slept with my ex.. no matter what.. so i hope Jean will keep up and ignoring her sister..
I was looking for some new stories to read when I found this. I like it so far. I've never been much of a fan of stories with female hockey players, but I like your approach, it's not about a girl that it's in her first year trying to make it, I like that it's about someone that has an established career and already has some history, I found it refreshing. I'm curious to see where you take this, your character is very likable and I want to know more about her. God job!