Another City...Another Man? - Comments

  • kayk33

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    Poor Jean! I can honestly say I was not expecting them to act like that but I think you hit their reactions spot on, despite what would have been ideal for her. My sister had problems similar to Jeans and my family and I reacted the same way, which only hurt her more. I realized she didn't choose to be that way and I feel like the guys need to realize this before everything blows out of proportion. I love how spot on you were and I adore this story. Cannot wait for more!
    March 26th, 2013 at 04:20am
  • Kenarik

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    I can understand her nervousness, I can also understand Sharpy's anger. I hope that she can find a way to get better again and he can find a way to forgive her in time.
    March 26th, 2013 at 04:17am
  • JDStanley

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    I'm glad that Jean told them the whole story. Hopefully now that the shock of it all will wear off on the guys and than they'll step up and all help her besides John. Although I have a feeling theirs going to be a lot of trust issues with the guys and Jean!!!!

    Update soon again!!!
    March 26th, 2013 at 03:06am
  • BBgirl123

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    OMG! I am like in love with this story! Update soon! Like soon soon!
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:50am
  • happygirl199

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    that was so mean and sad! an update would be great since you just left us hanging there!
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:32am
  • hkychk

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    I was not expecting them to react that way!!!!! Update soon!!
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:11am
  • sabrini98_

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    Awww! Nooooo! That's so sad! How can they just do that?! Ughhh! I feel bad fo her now. Lol
    March 26th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • JDStanley

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    I just found this story and I have to say its really good. I have to admit once again I'm not a big Johnathan Toews fan, but I enjoy reading stories with him in them if there well written. And this is really well written and really good. I have to say though I really hope that Jean talks to the psychiatrist. I get that John is upset that Jean lied to him, but he needs to calm down when he's talking to her. Because yelling is going to get both of them nowhere. Also I think all of the guys are going to be a little disappointed, feel a little betrayed and hurt. I think especially Sharpie is hurt the most because Jean lied to him also and he's her roomie on the road, so that trust and friendship is going to be tested.
    March 24th, 2013 at 03:27am
  • kayk33

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    hmmm I wonder how the guys are going to react to her confession... This was really well written. Can't wait to read more!
    March 23rd, 2013 at 04:05am
  • Hawkchick85

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    She needs to be in an institution she's obviously not capable of handling stress and pressure without hurting herself not to mention that she's lying to everyone. Jonathan's not going to be happy when he finds out. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS.
    March 17th, 2013 at 07:56am
  • sabrini98_

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    I wonder how Jon is going to feel when he finds out...
    March 17th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • kayk33

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    I liked that. I feel bad for her and I know that if she doesn't get any help, it's only going to get worse.
    March 17th, 2013 at 02:41am
  • kayk33

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    aaaaaand shit just hit the fan.
    March 16th, 2013 at 02:21pm
  • Thatmom

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    Noooooooo. This is just wrong.
    March 16th, 2013 at 11:52am
  • sabrini98_

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    Oh my gosh please no! She's been so strong!
    March 16th, 2013 at 06:12am
  • kayk33

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    aww is correct. Cute chapter but I have a feeling shits going to hit the fan soon.
    March 6th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • sabrini98_

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! <3
    March 5th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • MMM26

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    I'm glad she told him! Now they have to deal with a relationship and playing together.
    March 5th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm glad that Jonathan told her, but seeing as he's seeing someone else I don't know that it's going to have the desired effect he's looking for. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    March 5th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • kayk33

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    We're seeing another side to Gabe. I really hope Jean can get over this and not cause herself any harm. Jonathan needs to step up to the plate-- before someone else does.
    March 3rd, 2013 at 10:52pm