Fallen in Love With a Ghost - Comments

I really like the simplicity of the layout! I really enjoyed this story and especially your descriptions! The story idea is really original and I’ve never read a story like it, so good job with that! Anyway, I’m excited for the next installment and I’ll for sure recommend this!

I absolutely love this already, please continue it! :)

Oh wow I love it already. I was fixed to this story from the very first chapter and can't wait for more!

Holy balls!! That was hot! *fans self*

@ Call_me_Dot

haha thanks! :)

Verrry hot! ;) I liked it!

@ night89
thanks! the problem was that i had to wrie on my phone cuz my computer broke but its back so I can finally see what i'm writing!

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Hellllooooooo :)

This comment is after reading the first chapter of the story, but so far I actually like it. The idea seems original and new and something that I haven't seen before so I was looking forward to reading it. After reading the first chapter I was right, this is an interesting story :)
The only suggestions I would have would be to go over your work to avoid grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes. And add more details about the surrounds so that the readers can picture what is going on as well as feel what you're saying. But all in all,

Good Job and sorry for the lengthy comment lol :)

thanks guys!!! <333333
:)

@ Roxz
@ Robb
@ nippleopolus101
@ SpencerG

I dig this.

Good start :) Update soon!

very good. cant wait to read more.

Please update soon