Chemicals, Romance, and Coffee - Comments

Not my kind of story but this is very easy to follow and quite enjoyable. I think some more description of the scenery and character development will really help so anyone can enjoy it. From the comments I can see people really enjoy this story though so keep going!

@ RazorBladeGrenade
I'm glade you like it:):):)

omg moooorreeee?? Love it

Pleeeeeaaaaase update! I'm dying here!

@ XxAtomicAfterxX
Eep I'm so sorry. Anyways I have a story idea, would it be okay if I ran it by you? Message me

@ amykart
its all good, and thank you for the feedback:):):)

Oh wow okay. So generally I copy paste a comment I agree with a lot and then edit it but I was in a rush to get going so I published, meaning to come back and edit and then completely forgot to! I'm so,so sorry. Anyways here's my actual comment:
Okay this reminded me a bit of confessions of a teenage drama queen, as the main character is a girl moving from NY to NJ. Anyways you have awesome characterization skills but more details woukd be nice. Also add more imagery to your descriptions! Appeal to all the senses! But otherwises great job :)

@ amykart
did you like, copy the person below you comment????

@ Naty.jira
awww thank you:) I'll update soon i promise:):)

I love this story!! Its very easy to follow. please update soon :)

Heyy, comment swapper here..

not my kind of story ( I tend to stay away from 'real life' characters and band stuff)
That being said this is very easy to follow,although I think some more description of the scenery or characters would be good for people who aren't knowledgeable about them.
This would also bulk it out a bit as at the minute the chapters are quite short...

@ rawrtothedinosaur
thats ok:) I enjoy pointers and tip:) thank you I will try apply your tips to my story:):):)

Heyy, comment swapper here..

not my kind of story ( I tend to stay away from 'real life' characters and band stuff)
That being said this is very easy to follow,although I think some more description of the scenery or characters would be good for people who aren't knowledgeable about them.
This would also bulk it out a bit as at the minute the chapters are quite short...

Good luck with your writing ( and I'm sorry if the above comments sounded overly negative!)

@ Xeroxierox
aww thank you:):)

Haha, this is awesome, I really like LynZ's 'I don't give a shit' attitude, I like it so far, just keep going :D I love how you've portrayed gee as the shy, kin of. Confused one. It's nice.
~Xerox xo

Cool! ;)