August 25th, 2013 at 11:13pm
I think i'm falling in love with your writing. It's always so short, and so simple but it also is just incredibly written. You write like a painter would paint on a canvas, so flowing and beautifully. I mean, sorry if that's a bad comparison but it's just the one that comes to mind reading these.
I have to say, the layout is just so simple but everything about this piece seems so utterly complex to me. I feel there's always a deep and dark something underneath your fluid word choice and descriptive words. You are an amazing writer, that's for sure.
But that's okay because this story absolutely packed a punch. It was so short but the words were very dense and full of emotion. Every word is chosen perfectly to create a beautiful image in the reader's head.
I love how vague this whole drabble is, because you think you know what is going on but when you finish it, you're like, then again, maybe I don't? It's so mysterious and enchanting that I think it will stick with me for a while, especially the last two sentences, wow.
Plus what I really liked about this piece was how it felt while reading it. It felt as if I was with the narrator, feeling enchanted and drowning. It was so relaxing. I adore this.