Oh my, I usually shy away from A7X fanfiction mostly because I am so tired of them. Still, I read your work and was pleasantly surprised. This is fairly well written and the plot line is not the typical cliché. The sex scene was rather intense and you made Brian overall intense, which is how he seems to often be described in fanfiction. I like their relationship, it's so consuming for her. This is good :)
I love how Brian is so controlling and demanding. This was amazingly written. I love the sex scene. It was just overall amazing. Great job Thanks for entering my contest!
I agree with synful_desires :) you should turn it out a full lenght :) my God this was hot. I think I made a mistake reading it before going to sleep lol
“If you wanted me Tainy, all you had to do was ask.” Seriously, Brian? Is that easy have you for one night??? LOL
Giiiiiiiiiiiiirl!!!! Are you trying to kill me??? When you said you would write an one-shot of Brian to me; NEVER I thought you would use my name as the step-daughter!!!! I LOVED it!!! You have no idea how giggling like an idiot I was while reading it! Thank you so much!!! You made this boring Monday turn out wonderful to me! <3 I'm sure as hell I'll have kinky dreams tonight! LOL
The sex scene was rather intense and you made Brian overall intense, which is how he seems to often be described in fanfiction.
I like their relationship, it's so consuming for her.
This is good :)