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  • captain-perrentes

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    @ Haidereouo
    i've posted it on my wattpad as well, i can promise this is my own work in every aspect :)
    October 18th, 2013 at 08:22am
  • Haidereouo

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    I've read this somewhere else. Confused
    October 15th, 2013 at 06:50am
  • jagksexual

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    the ending was perect.
    September 13th, 2013 at 10:19pm
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    @ OfMiceAndKayla
    You've given me a bout of inspiration, cheers mate. Expect a chapter 2 sharpish c:
    May 29th, 2013 at 04:54pm
  • OfMiceAndKayla

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    You are NOT sorry. You liar >.> you could make this a chaptered thing you know, it has that potential, I'm sure you don't want to though xD
    May 29th, 2013 at 03:41am
  • wowfairy13

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    This was so good!!! I seriously need to try and pull myself together lol and THAT ENDING OMG I CAN'T EVEN. I can't even.
    April 21st, 2013 at 03:12am
  • captain-perrentes

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    @ Ponyess
    thanks for the suggestion, i'll set about breaking it into paragraphs c: just let me know what situations you find confusing and i'll find a way to clarify
    March 11th, 2013 at 03:17pm
  • Ponyess

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    How to break it?
    Para-Graphs?
    Sadly, there are a few confusing situations, where the actual intent is muddied by what you're actually stating.
    March 8th, 2013 at 09:07pm
  • captain-perrentes

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    @ leeyahbvb97
    heh thankyouu, hopefully your ovaries make a speedy recovery :)
    February 10th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • leeyahbvb

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    oh my god its perfect. my ovaries are gone and m heart is just ungh and then ending....i just love it its amazing
    February 10th, 2013 at 02:13pm
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    @ fiction246
    thankyou so much ^-^
    February 2nd, 2013 at 10:19am
  • fiction246

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    Haha I love it :)
    February 2nd, 2013 at 08:09am