Everything Has Changed - Comments

Can't wait for more!

i love your story and this is my contribution (:

Aww this is cute! I loved that she was hiding from Alex and he's like ok. It's was really cute! Update soon?

Update. I love the story line, and the last part where she's saying she's hiding from Alex an he's just like "oh well ok". You need to update or I'll go crazy.

No, but seriously. What the hell kind of name is Sulphur?I've always wondered. ._.

But anyways, this is actually pretty good. See, now we're gettin' somewhere! I'd totally read this. And I shall, btw.

I like the characters and their relationships and stuff, but the story is nice, too.

Really nice job, babe.

yes! they meet in a starbucks and not at a concert! so much better. I was dreading having to read a concert scene. so much better. thank you!

This is really good! I really hope you won't make it one of those clinche stories when boy gets girl pregnant after one night stand,fight about custody, and then falling in love and getting married. There's too much stories like that. I really want this to be unique. I love the way you write though :)

you didn't disappoint at all! so good! not cliché, not stupid. Different. It's a story that actually has me waiting nervously for the next update!

@ Helenaaa___
Haha, no you didn't ruin my plot or piss me off. Thank you for saying it has a new kind of feel. It's what I'm going for. :)

This is well written and has a new kind of feel to it. Not a cliche little plot like oh no Alex fucked me over lets have an argument and I end up pregnant with his bestfriends baby when he tries to comfort me. But its all fine because he takes her back in the end. Kind of thing.
If I've totally just pissed you off I'm sorry. And I'm sorry if I just ruined your plot too.
But I really really can't wait to read more of this.

This was v. good once again. Yes Jack we all know you make Alex feel good all night, no need to brag

well, at least he was honest. But seriously, she was smart. It's better not to be toyed with. haha post soon?!?! pleaaaassseeee!?!?!?

Alex how could you!! But this seems really interesting please update it soon ;)

Post soon?!!? This sounds perfect!