In For The Kill - Comments

@ Freakocean
Thanks :)
sorry about the spelling and grammar English isn't my first language.

I think this concept could work really well, you just need to clean up your spelling and how you deliver your lines in some parts, and maybe a little bit more of a back story on why he hated him so much would of been good too, but in saying that it was still set out in a good manner too.

but besides that it was a really cute story and the characters were good and I liked the ending a lot

make sure you check back after the 5th to see if you placed

This is so cute and well-written, I'm loving it so far. I'm definitely going to subscribe and see where this goes. I adore Hayden's character already, keep up the good work love <3